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Roman policier 1/2
Message de jammy posté le 15-05-2005 à 20:40:52 (S | E | F | I)

Salut! Il pleut ici !!! Je suis énervé! Donc voici le texte à traduire.
Etant donné qu'il est assez long, faites tres attention: en cas de doutes vous avez un dictionnaire... Donc je ne veux voir aucune faute Enfin...
A bientôt!

Je me demandais si j’étais à la bonne adresse. Les gens comme moi manquent de certitude quand leur secrétaire n’est pas à leurs côtés.
La porte s’ouvrit enfin.
- Madame Florian ?
- Oui, mais je n’achète rien, ce n’est pas la peine d’essayer…
- Madame Florian, je ne veux rien vous vendre. Laissez moi vous expliquer. Je suis détective. J’ai besoin de renseignements. Vous voyez ce que je veux dire ?
Je lui avais posé cette question car elle me fixait du regard bizarrement.
- Mike n’a rien fait de mal à nouveau, au moins ?
- Non, non. Je recherche une fille appelée Val. Elle travaillait dans le magasin de votre défunt mari, il y a deux ans. C’est tout ce que je sais, et je suis venu pour vous demander plus de renseignements.
- Entrez. Je me faisais justement un thé, vous en voulez ? Ou la police ne boit- elle jamais de thé ?
- Merci, mais comme je vous l’ai dit auparavant je ne suis pas policier. Les parents de Val payent ce travail.

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Edité par grabuge le 15-05-2005 20:42 - Etoiles

Réponse: Roman policier 1/2 de grabuge, postée le 15-05-2005 à 20:56:22 (S | E)
Bonsoir Jammy

I wondered if I was to the good address. People like me lack of certitude when their secretary isn't near them.
At least, the door opened.
- Mrs Florian ?
- Yes, I am but I buy nothing, it's not necessary to try
- Mrs Florian, I don't want you to sell anything. Let's me explain to you. I'm a detective. I need some information. Can you see what I want to say ?.
I had asked her this question because she stared at me strangely.
- Mike hasn't done anything wrong again, has he?
- No, He hasn't. I research a girl named Val. She worked in the shop of your late husband, two years ago. That's all I know and I went to ask you more informations.
- Come in. I just made me some tea, Would you want some ? Or, the police never drinks some tea ?
- Thanks but as I told you before, I'm not a policeman. Val's parents pay for this job.

- J'implore ta clémence pour ta correction

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Edité par grabuge le 17-05-2005 08:34 - merci Jammy

Réponse: Roman policier 1/2 de jardin62, postée le 15-05-2005 à 21:16:53 (S | E)
Bonsoir jammy.

I was wondering whether I was at the right place or not. People like me lack of confidence when their secretary isn't by their side.
The door opened at last.
- 'Madame Florian?
- I am Madame Florian, but I don't want to buy anything, it isn't worth trying.
- Madame Florian, I have nothing to sell. Let me explain. I am a detective. I need information. Do you see what I mean?'
I had asked her that question because she was staring at me in /a weird way/an unusual way/
- 'Mike hasn't done anything wrong again, has he?
- No, of course not. I am looking for a girl called Val. Two years ago she was working in your late husband's shop. It's all I know and I've come to ask you for more information.
- Come in. I was just having a cup of tea ready for me, would you like some?... Police people never drink tea, maybe?
- Thank you, but as I told you before I am not from the police. Val's parents are paying for the job.

Ce fut ardu.
jammy

Réponse: Roman policier 1/2 de regine_lyon, postée le 15-05-2005 à 22:03:12 (S | E)
Bon, c'est clair que c'est tard et que je fatigue ....

I was wondering whether I was at the correct address. People like me feel a lack of conviction when their secretary is not at their side.
Finally the door opened.
- Mrs Florian ?
- Yes, but I don't buy anything. Don't go to a lot of trouble to try…
- Mrs Florian, I want to sell you nothing. Let me explain you. I am a detective. I need some information. Do you see what I mean ?
I asked her because she was staring at me strangely.
- Mike hasn't done anything wrong again, has he ?
- No, no. I'm looking for a girl, named Val. She was working on your late husband's shop, two years ago. I don't know anything else, that's why I'm asking you more information.
- Come in. I was making tea. Do you want some ? Or do policemen never drink tea?
- Thanks, but as I've already told you, I'm not a policeman. Val's parents are paying for this work.

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Edité par regine_lyon le 16-05-2005 10:22

Réponse: Roman policier 1/2 de jammy, postée le 15-05-2005 à 23:33:11 (S | E)
Pas mal du tout pour le moment.... A bientôt et consultez bien vos dictionnaires!

Réponse: Roman policier 1/2 de bridg, postée le 15-05-2005 à 23:51:25 (S | E)
He ben là la coupe est pleine, je ne pourrais pas en faire une quatrième, je jetterais mon dictionnaire par la fenêtre

I was wondering if I was at the right place. People like me are short of insurance when their secretary isn’t by their side.
At last the door opened.
Madam Florian?
- Yes,I'm but I'm not buying anything, you needn’t bother to try
- Madam Florian, I am not a seller. Let me explain. I am a detective. I need some information. You see what I mean?
I asked her this question because she was queerly staring at me.
I hope Mike hasn’t do anything wrong again? Has he?
- no, no. I am looking for a girl called Val. She was working, two years ago in your late husband’s shop. I don’t know anything else, and I am here to ask you for more information.
- Come in. I was preparing some tea, do you want a cup? Or do the policemen never drink tea?
- thank you, but as I have told you previously I am not a policeman. Val’s parents are paying for this job.
mais la prochaine fois que tu es énervé, que dirais-tu d'un petit footing, hein???

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Edité par bridg le 16-05-2005 08:41
Merci jammy, j'ai modifié les 3 maladresses signalées

Réponse: Roman policier 1/2 de jammy, postée le 16-05-2005 à 02:07:24 (S | E)

En général je fais du sport! Mais ma salle est fermée le dimanche et Lundi aussi!!!
Il va y avoir du boulot pour vous

Réponse: Roman policier 1/2 de jardin62, postée le 16-05-2005 à 08:34:56 (S | E)
oh, la, la!
merci jammy: 'lack confidence!'
Allez, un travail supplémentaire: ça m'apprendra!
* Verbe 'to lack':
- We lacked helpers
- He lacks experience
- They lack water
- She lacks sleep (sure!)
- We lack the last figures
- You lack nothing
* Substantif:
- A lack of judgement
- A lack of money
- A lack of power
- She is tired from a lack of sleep
=> Voilà comment pourquoi je me suis fait piéger!
=> People (like me) lack confidence (verbe 'manquer de')
=> He won't get the job because of his lack of experience (..à cause de son manque /défaut/ d'expérience)
* Je suis sûre que ça ne m'arrivera plus...avant la prochaine fois!

Réponse: Roman policier 1/2 de lucile83, postée le 16-05-2005 à 08:45:30 (S | E)
Hello,
je ne résiste pas.....
I wondered whether I was in the right place. People like me lack confidence when their secretary is far from them.
The door opened at last.
-Mrs Florian?
-yes, but I am not buying anything, it’s no use trying…
-Mrs Florian, I don’t want to sell anything to you. Let me explain. I am a detective. I need information. Do you see what I mean?
I had asked her that question because she was strangely staring at me.
-Mike hasn’t done anything wrong again, has he?
-no, no. I am looking for a girl named Val. She used to work in your late husband’s shop, two years ago. That’s all what I know, and I came to ask you for more information.
-Come in. I was preparing some tea right now, do you want some? Or do the police never drink tea?
-Thank you, but as I have told you just before I am not a policeman. Val’s parents are paying for this job.
See you soon

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Edité par lucile83 le 16-05-2005 09:03

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Edité par lucile83 le 16-05-2005 18:57

Réponse: Roman policier 1/2 de venicia12, postée le 16-05-2005 à 11:10:11 (S | E)
Salut tout le monde
Je t'avertis que j'ai triche un petit peu juste le debut avec les reponses
des autres

I was wondering whether I was at the right place or not. People like me lack of confidence when their secretary isn't by their side.
At last, the door opened.
-Mrs Fobian?
Yes, but I don't buy anything, so don't bother yourself..
-Mrs Fobian, I don't try selling you something. Let me explain.I'm a detective. I need some informations. Do you see what I mean?
I asked this question because she stared at me strangely.
-Mike haven't done anything wrong,at less has it?
-no,no. I'm looking for a girl named Val.She was working in the shop of your defunct husband,two years ago.This is what I only know, and I come to get more informations.
-Come in.I was making some tea,do you want?Or the policeman never drink tea?
-Thank you, but like I told you before I'm not a policeman.
The Vals'parents pay this work.

Réponse: Roman policier 1/2 de savoir, postée le 16-05-2005 à 17:41:20 (S | E)
Bonsoir à tous , Hi Jammy merci pour ce perilleux exercice(s'entend pour moi).
I wondered myself If I was not wrong about address. People as me have a lack of certitude when their assistant is far from them. The door opened at last.
Miss Florian ?
Yes, but I don't buy anything ,it is not worthwhile to try.
Miss Florian, I don't like to sell you nothing.Let me explain you.I'm a house detective. I need some informations. Do you see what I mean? I asked this question because she stared at me strangely.
Did Mike have done harm again ,at least?
No,No I'm seeking for a girl named Val.She has been worked in the store of your dead's husband, two years ago.That's all what I know, and I went to ask for more informations.
Come on! I was just preparing my tea. Do you want any it? or the policemen doesn't ever drink tea?
Thank you but as I have told you before I'm not a policeman. The Val's parents pay for this work.

Réponse: Roman policier 1/2 de kathleen, postée le 16-05-2005 à 20:30:57 (S | E)
Hello Jammy!

Alors là, si vous pensez que vous vous sentiriez mieux en corrigeant nos chefs d'oeuvre, vous vous trompez énormément .
Nous sommes toujours là pour vous rendre la vie plus difficile.
Bon trêve de plaisanterie, j'espère ne pas avoir fait trop d'erreurs.

I wondered if I was in the right place. People like me lack confidence when their secretary isn’t near them.
The door opened at last.
- Madam Florian?
- Yes, but I don’t buy nothing, it isn’t worth trying…
- Madam Florian, I don’t want anything to sell to you. Let me explain. I am detective. I need more information. Do you see what I mean?
I had asked her this question because she was strangly staring at me.
- Mike hasn’t done anything wrong again, has he?
- No, no. I am looking for a girl called Val. Two years ago, she was working in the late husband’s store. That’s all what I know, and I came to ask you for more information.
- Come in. I have just done a tea, do you want? Or do police never drink tea?
- Thank you, but as I told you previously, I am not police officer.Val’s parents are paying for this job.

beaucoup Jammy! (Et conseil , avant de corriger, il faut que vous preniez un tranquillisant )

Réponse: Roman policier 1/2 de masselotte, postée le 16-05-2005 à 21:18:43 (S | E)
Bonsoir à toutes et à tous
merci jammy

I wondered if I was to the good address.People like me haven't got enough confidence when her secretary isn't by their side.
At last the door opened.
Mis Florian?
Yes,but I don't buy anything,and don't try to sell something at me ...
Madam Florian I won't sell anything.Let's me to explain to you.I am tec.I have need some information.Do you understand that I want tell ?
I asked this question to her because her look heading toward and seemed me to be strange.
Mike has neither do of unpleasant at last
oh no. I look for a girl who's call Val.She worked in the store of your husband dead 2 years ago.This is all that I know,and I'm coming to see you asking more informations.
Coming in .I'm just making some tea, do you want a cup of tea ?Where the police never drink about
Thank, but as you told you before I am not a policeman.Val's parents pay this job.

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Edité par masselotte le 17-05-2005 15:19 jammy

Réponse: Roman policier 1/2 de isa71, postée le 16-05-2005 à 22:28:02 (S | E)
attends moi jammy je m'y mets mercredi il faut que je me batte pour avoir le clavier vainqueur par k.o
merci bonne soirée

Réponse: Roman policier 1/2 de serena, postée le 17-05-2005 à 03:41:19 (S | E)
Please wait for me too Jammy. But for me, it'll be before mercredi.

(ça rime )

Réponse: Roman policier 1/2 de jammy, postée le 17-05-2005 à 06:14:08 (S | E)
ok je vous attends!!! (en fait ça m'arrange car je passe une nuit blanche ce soir... Je bosse de la civilisation. Demain mes stagiaires seront morts de peur en me voyant tout cerné )

Au fait pour le week-end prochain révisez à fond le vocabulaire de la nourriture... J'ai une surprise pour vous
A mercredi... Et tenez bon!

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Edité par jammy le 17-05-2005 06:14

Réponse: Roman policier 1/2 de jardin62, postée le 17-05-2005 à 06:30:51 (S | E)
jammy! un pique nique?

Réponse: Roman policier 1/2 de jammy, postée le 17-05-2005 à 16:30:47 (S | E)
Merci jardin...
les autres je vous attends ! La correction demain au réveil

Réponse: Roman policier 1/2 de isa71, postée le 17-05-2005 à 17:24:30 (S | E)
hello

I wondered if I was at the right address.people like me lack of confidence when their secretary isn't by their side.
the door opened at last.
-Mrs Florian?
-yes,but I don't buy anything,it isn't worth while to try...
-Mrs Florian I don't want to sell you nothing.let me explain.
I'm detective .I need some information.Do you you see what I meen?
I had asked her that question because she stared me strangely.
Mike hasn't do anything wrong again,has he?
-No,no.I'm looking for a girl named Val.
she worked in your late husband's shop 2 years ago.
It's all that I know,and I came to ask for more information.
come in, I was just preparing a tea,do you want some?Or the police never drink some tea?
-thank you,but as I have told you previously,I'm not a policeman.
Val's parents are paying for this job.

jammy

Réponse: Roman policier 1/2 de cam3, postée le 17-05-2005 à 19:11:00 (S | E)
Bonjour et merci d' avoir attendu !
I was wondering if I was at the right place .People like me can feel a little uncertain when their secretary isn't at hand .
The door opened at last .
- Mrs Florian ?
- Yes, I am but I don' t want to buy anything, it's no use trying ...
- Mrs Florian, I don't want to sell you anything. Let me explain . I' m a detective. I do need information. Do you see what I mean ?
I had asked her because she was looking at me with a puzzled look.
- Mike hasn't been doing anything wrong again, has he ?
- No, no. I'm looking for a girl called Val . She used to work in your late husband's shop two years ago. That's all I know, and I've come to ask you for more information.
- Come in. I was just making myself a cup of tea; would you like some ? Or can't policemen accept a cup of tea ?
Yes, please,but I've already told you that I am not a policeman. Val's parents are paying me . ( Val's parents have hired me for this job ?)

Que c' était dur !!!

Réponse: Roman policier 1/2 de jammy, postée le 18-05-2005 à 02:39:24 (S | E)
Bravo à vous on a fini en beauté...

Voici ma proposition, mais j'ai pu lire aussi bien,, voire mieux parfois!

I was wondering if I was at the right address. People like me lack confidence when their secretary is not at their side.
The door finally opened.
“Are you Mrs Florian?”
“Yes I am, but I am not buying anything, it’s no use trying…
“Mrs Florian, I am not selling you anything. Let me explain. I’m a detective. I need some information. Do you understand what I mean?
I had asked her that question for she was staring at me strangely.
“Mike hasn’t done something wrong again, has he?”
“No, no. I am looking for a girl called Val. She used to work in your late husband’s shop, two years ago. That’s all I know, and I have come to ask you for more information.
“Come in. I was just making tea; do you want some? Or do the police never drink tea?”
“Thank you but as I've told you before I'm not a policeman. Val’s parents are paying for that job.

Voilà! J'ai beaucoup de boulot, je me retire un long moment !!!
N'oubliez pas de réviser le thème de la nourriture pour samedi.
Et je ferai de mon possible pour vous poster la 2éme partie de .... roman policier 2/2 ... D'ici là !!! Révisezzzz vos structures! et vos temps grammaticaux (tenses)

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Edité par jammy le 18-05-2005 02:43

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Edité par jammy le 18-05-2005 16:37 faute corrigé lucile , j'avais mal placé la contraction

Réponse: Roman policier 1/2 de serena, postée le 18-05-2005 à 03:20:26 (S | E)
Salut Jammy !

Comme prévu, before mercredi. Enfin.....je veux dire avant le lever du soleil de mercredi.

I was wondering if I was at the right place. People like me lack assurance when their secretary is not by their side (is away).
At last, the door opened.
- Mrs. Florian?
- Yes, but I buy nothing, no need trying.......
- Mrs. Florian, I don’t want to sell you anything. Let me explain to you. I’m a detective. And I need some information. Can you get what I mean?
I asked her that as she was staring at me with a queer look.
- Mike did nothing bad again, did he?
- No, no.....I’m looking for a girl whose name’s Val. She worked in your late husband’s shop two years ago. This is all I know, and I came to ask you for more information.
- Come in. I was making myself tea at this very moment, do you want some? Or maybe policemen never drink tea?
- Thank you. But as I told you before, I’m not a policeman. Val’s parents are paying for this job.

Voilà ! Super intéressant !

Merci !

Réponse: Roman policier 1/2 de serena, postée le 18-05-2005 à 03:30:46 (S | E)
Tu as déjà corrigé ?
C'était prévu pour demain, non ?

Ok, pas grave. Hier justement j'ai failli mettre (ou j'ai sûrement mis) ma crédibilité en cause simplement parce que je ne lis pas les posts avant de répondre. Et j'avais pourtant promis de le faire à partir de maintenant.
Je n'y manquerai plus.

Merci quand même, Jammy. J'attends ton prochain thème, en espérant ne pas le rater cette fois.

A bientôt !

Réponse: Roman policier 1/2 de lucile83, postée le 18-05-2005 à 14:37:19 (S | E)
Hello Jammy,

Cette contraction me chagrine :
I've told you before I amn’t a policeman.

si mes souvenirs sont bons on doit dire.............I ain't a policeman

alors.....je penche pour une faute de frappe.......

See you soon

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