About a cartoon( correction)
Message de bastinou posté le 06-11-2005 à 18:46:19 (S | E | F | I)

Bonjour
J'aurais voulu(s) que quelqu'nn de compétant me corrige mon le devoir que je vais écrire merci

The document I have to comment upon is a cartoon. The scene takes place in the living room of a flat and it show a man hovers the window pane. The cartoon is distinct and the colors are bright. The various element are yelow window ,red curtains orange floor and the man is wearing brown shoes, a blue jean,a green shirt.throw the window pane i can see dark buildings that i deduce he lives in an urban environment.
Oblique lines of the window,curtains,buildings and the posture of the man make people puzzled and give a sensation of confusion.
The man looks astonished judging from that expression I may suppose it is the first time he uses a vacuum cleaner.considering that the man is represented like an ignorant I guess the cartonist wants to tell us that men have to feeling more concern in the housework.the cartoon shows the traditional view that men think doing chores is women work.the cartonist draw it cartoon to make people laught and react on men attitude. I think the cartonist is a girl because of it's a criticize on men behavious.She wants to teaching us a lesson and to warn us that they must change their mind.
I don't approve of the underlying message because of I am convinced that men change since women began to have a working life.My feeling is that number of house hubands increase and it willl not stop
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Edité par bridg le 06-11-2005 19:04
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