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Message de stephmagg0107 posté le 2004-11-28 16:10:11 (S | E | F | I)
c'est l' expression que j'avais à rédiger pourriez vous vérifier si le sens et la grammaire son corrects merci beaucoup

- good evening, I go up in my bedroom I have full homeworks to finish for tomorrow.
- Goes down again please I will like to speak a few minutes with you of this incident of this morning, say Martin
- I have anything to say. I doesnét want to speak about it. If you want, you can keep the gun I make fun about it, Kevin answers
- It is not so simple, why you are in possession of this gun. You know the dangers of them.
- Yes (pas la peine de me faire la morale) it isn't mine it's to a buddy. I was to bring back today for him for not that his parents notice it.
- I know that you is reasonable thus you know well that a weapon does not have its place in the hands of child a 13 year old boy and even less at the school.
- You don't worried I did nothing but transport it, nothing moreover, affirmed Kevin
- I thought that it is the truth however I will prevenir his parents because it is anormal they must know more it is illegal I will have to submit a report to my captain of it.

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Edité par bridg le 28-11-2004 16:18


Réponse: re:vérifiez si c'est correct de cocoon, postée le 2004-11-28 18:06:48 (S | E)
Bonsoir!

- Good evening, I go up in my bedroom I have a lot of homeworks to finish for tomorrow.
- Come down again please I would like to talk to you a few minutes with you of about the incident of this morning, say Martin said/says
- I don't have anything to say. I don't want to speak about it. If you want, you can keep the gun (I make fun about it??), Kevin answers
- It is not so easy, why are you are in possession of this gun. You know its dangers of them.
- Yes (pas la peine de me faire la morale) it isn't mine it's my friend's. I was to bring back today for him for not that his parents notice it.
- I know that you is are reasonable thus you know well that a weapon does not have its place in the hands of child a 13 years old boy and even less at the school.
- You don't worry I did nothing but transport it, nothing moreover else, Kevin affirmed
- I thought/think that it is the truth however I will tell his parents because it is not normal they must know more it is illegal I will have to submit a report to my captain of about it.

Je n'ai pas dû tout bien corriger, il doit encore rester des fautes, mais bon, j'éspère que ce sera déjà un bon début pour toi!




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