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Lettre de motivation
Message de guiguixu posté le 23-03-2007 à 10:00:42 (S | E | F | I)
Bonjour à tous,
Je suis actuellement étudiant en seconde année de droit et j'envisage d'effectuer ma troisième année en Angleterre avec le programme Erasmus. Je dois rédiger une lettre de motivation dans la langue choisie adressée à mon président de faculté. Je me permets de vous soumettre mon premier jet, tous les avis et correctifs sont les bienvenus. Je vous en serais très reconnaissant. Votre avis sur le programme Erasmus m'intéresse également. je vous remercie d'avance. Guillaume.
LETTRE
Dear Sir,
I’m writing to you in connection with my apply for a participation to the Erasmus programme.
I’m presently in my second year of "Licence Droit". Besides the fact that is born a real interest for the law subject my future prospects become clear. That’s why I’m thinking of doing my third year in one of the three universities chosen that are the City University of London, the University of Nottingham and the University of Birmingham in the preferential order.
Thinking of postgraduate studies specialised in international law a third year of Licence in Erasmus seams to be, according to me, an important stage or even determining. A professional project focused on abroad requires aptitudes of mobility and adaptation that are also require for an Erasmus year. So, to my mind, this experience seams to be essential to acquire these qualities.
Being initiated during my two first years into the French law system it appears to be enriching to can study and acquire an other way of functioning all the more so since the common law countries reveal a model radically different.
At last there is of course a cultural and linguistic interest in my approach. Immersion in a foreign country is unquestionably the better way of acquiring the command of a foreign language. Moreover this command is essential if only for a professional activity. The discovery of a new civilisation, of a new way of life, takes part of an open-mindedness fundamental, in my opinion, to the personal fulfilment.
I have put a lot into my two first years with corrects results and you can be sure of the continuity of my work in this new framework if it should turn up.
Thanking you for the interest awarded to my apply, yours Faithfully.
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Modifié par willy le 23-03-2007 10:49
Message de guiguixu posté le 23-03-2007 à 10:00:42 (S | E | F | I)
Bonjour à tous,
Je suis actuellement étudiant en seconde année de droit et j'envisage d'effectuer ma troisième année en Angleterre avec le programme Erasmus. Je dois rédiger une lettre de motivation dans la langue choisie adressée à mon président de faculté. Je me permets de vous soumettre mon premier jet, tous les avis et correctifs sont les bienvenus. Je vous en serais très reconnaissant. Votre avis sur le programme Erasmus m'intéresse également. je vous remercie d'avance. Guillaume.
LETTRE
Dear Sir,
I’m writing to you in connection with my apply for a participation to the Erasmus programme.
I’m presently in my second year of "Licence Droit". Besides the fact that is born a real interest for the law subject my future prospects become clear. That’s why I’m thinking of doing my third year in one of the three universities chosen that are the City University of London, the University of Nottingham and the University of Birmingham in the preferential order.
Thinking of postgraduate studies specialised in international law a third year of Licence in Erasmus seams to be, according to me, an important stage or even determining. A professional project focused on abroad requires aptitudes of mobility and adaptation that are also require for an Erasmus year. So, to my mind, this experience seams to be essential to acquire these qualities.
Being initiated during my two first years into the French law system it appears to be enriching to can study and acquire an other way of functioning all the more so since the common law countries reveal a model radically different.
At last there is of course a cultural and linguistic interest in my approach. Immersion in a foreign country is unquestionably the better way of acquiring the command of a foreign language. Moreover this command is essential if only for a professional activity. The discovery of a new civilisation, of a new way of life, takes part of an open-mindedness fundamental, in my opinion, to the personal fulfilment.
I have put a lot into my two first years with corrects results and you can be sure of the continuity of my work in this new framework if it should turn up.
Thanking you for the interest awarded to my apply, yours Faithfully.
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Modifié par willy le 23-03-2007 10:49
Réponse: Lettre de motivation de guiguixu, postée le 24-03-2007 à 09:36:13 (S | E)
Bonjour,
Je vois que certains sont passés pour corriger certaines petites fautes de français, mais aucun avis sur ma question ! S'il vous plaît, expliquez-moi alors pourquoi, est-ce trop long ? D'autant que j'ai vraiment besoin d'aide....merci !
