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Message de prunette posté le 15-05-2007 à 17:50:17 (S | E | F | I)
Bonjour,
Excusez-moi de vous déranger. C'est mon dernier post avant un bon petit moment. Demain matin, j'ai mes examens : pouvez-vous m'aider pour des phrases que j'ai faites, s'il vous plaît avant ce soir ? J'ai essayé de faire le moins d'erreurs, il suffira d'une lecture rapide. Merci de votre aide
During the First World War, their own weapons are against them. During Hitler's speech, G, minister of the Interior looks his watch because he bores. He knows his speech. He has done him. G is clumsy He falls in the stairs because of G. So he removes him medals.he wipes his hands after to have touched a baby.
anna is alone because her parents are dead. The strom troopers stole vegetables. H is angry, she insults them. So they throw tomatoes at anna. They are oppressive.
The barber defends himself, so the storm troopers's face is covered in white paint. anna helps her because she strikes the two storm troopers with her frying pan. Then the strorm troopers want to hang the barber. And Commander Shultz saves his safe.
H changes his policy towards Jews the time that E a Jew lends him money to attack oSTERLICH. So the ghetto is quiet. H is angry because his pens aren't functionning. The barber shaves anna, it is funny and she thinks that the barber looks like him because they are absent minded both. Then she falls and the storm troopers help her. She hopes peace. Epstein refuses to make a loan. So H wants to attack the ghetto. THE Commander hides a coin in pudding at 4 people whose the barber jaeckel... The person who will find the piece in his pudding will be able(devra) to put a bomb into palace. But they have all a coin because Hanna has cheated to save their lives. They exchange piece.. They also cheat except for Mr jaeckel. THE BARBER swallows them. Anna is sensible She thinks that there are enough deaths.. She doesn't want deaths no longer. The s troopers capture them : barber + commander. They have sent them to a Concentration Camp. Hanna and Jaeckel go to Osterlich.. h GIVES A medal because thanks to him they will be able to attack osterlich. They bang their head in bending their heads. He removes Herring's medals once again. So he wants to declare war on Napoloni. G gives him a paper in a row for declaration of war...and a pen which functionnes...He has always everything contrary to Hitler.. He is the real dictator. Napoloni dominates. He asks Hitler and G for a watch and they apologize.. When they go to shave... They raise their seats to be the highest.... G advices H to dance with Napoloni's wife to win powerful.. Then They fight with food and they suffocate both with mustard... They are silly..They aren"t dictators..because They behave like children.. They are thirsty for power
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Modifié par prunette le 15-05-2007 17:53
Message de prunette posté le 15-05-2007 à 17:50:17 (S | E | F | I)
Bonjour,
Excusez-moi de vous déranger. C'est mon dernier post avant un bon petit moment. Demain matin, j'ai mes examens : pouvez-vous m'aider pour des phrases que j'ai faites, s'il vous plaît avant ce soir ? J'ai essayé de faire le moins d'erreurs, il suffira d'une lecture rapide. Merci de votre aide
During the First World War, their own weapons are against them. During Hitler's speech, G, minister of the Interior looks his watch because he bores. He knows his speech. He has done him. G is clumsy He falls in the stairs because of G. So he removes him medals.he wipes his hands after to have touched a baby.
anna is alone because her parents are dead. The strom troopers stole vegetables. H is angry, she insults them. So they throw tomatoes at anna. They are oppressive.
The barber defends himself, so the storm troopers's face is covered in white paint. anna helps her because she strikes the two storm troopers with her frying pan. Then the strorm troopers want to hang the barber. And Commander Shultz saves his safe.
H changes his policy towards Jews the time that E a Jew lends him money to attack oSTERLICH. So the ghetto is quiet. H is angry because his pens aren't functionning. The barber shaves anna, it is funny and she thinks that the barber looks like him because they are absent minded both. Then she falls and the storm troopers help her. She hopes peace. Epstein refuses to make a loan. So H wants to attack the ghetto. THE Commander hides a coin in pudding at 4 people whose the barber jaeckel... The person who will find the piece in his pudding will be able(devra) to put a bomb into palace. But they have all a coin because Hanna has cheated to save their lives. They exchange piece.. They also cheat except for Mr jaeckel. THE BARBER swallows them. Anna is sensible She thinks that there are enough deaths.. She doesn't want deaths no longer. The s troopers capture them : barber + commander. They have sent them to a Concentration Camp. Hanna and Jaeckel go to Osterlich.. h GIVES A medal because thanks to him they will be able to attack osterlich. They bang their head in bending their heads. He removes Herring's medals once again. So he wants to declare war on Napoloni. G gives him a paper in a row for declaration of war...and a pen which functionnes...He has always everything contrary to Hitler.. He is the real dictator. Napoloni dominates. He asks Hitler and G for a watch and they apologize.. When they go to shave... They raise their seats to be the highest.... G advices H to dance with Napoloni's wife to win powerful.. Then They fight with food and they suffocate both with mustard... They are silly..They aren"t dictators..because They behave like children.. They are thirsty for power
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Modifié par prunette le 15-05-2007 17:53
Réponse: petit texte capital de mp27, postée le 15-05-2007 à 19:58:26 (S | E)
Hello prunette,
-- to look “at” his watch
-- s'ennuyer = to be bored, pas to bore.
-- tu dois corriger “him” medals. Pourquoi?
-- he has done “him”? Attention, ne pas confondre him avec “it”.
-- on ne tombe pas “in” the stairs, mais “down” the stairs.
-- pas de “to” après “after” . Ajoute ing à la base verbale.
-- to be cover “with”
-- frapper: ici, il s'agit du verbe to "hit".
-- his policy towards “the” Jews
-- “when” E, a Jew, ... (pas “the time that”)
-- place de “both”-> pas en fin de phrase, mais entre “are” et ”absent-minded”
-- to hope “for” peace
-- in “a” pudding “for” 4 people, “including” Jaekel, the barber.
-- who will find the “coin”, pas “the piece”, puisqu'une pièce (de monnaie) = a coin.
-- devra = will have to (pas will be able to)
-- a bomb in / into “the” palace.
-- they “all” have a coin (pas “all” devant a coin)
-- they exchange piece??? Cela n'a pas de sens. Tu veux dire: They exchange their coin?
-- Mal exprimé--> there are enough deaths.She doesn't want deaths no longer.
Suggestion: there are already too many dead people and she doesn't want another one.
-- a paper in a row for declaration of war? Je n'ai pas compris.
-- He has always everything contrary to Hitler. Est-ce que tu voulais dire: He is very different from Hitler?
-- le verbe conseiller = to advise, se terminant par “se” (mais le nom, conseil, se termine par “ce”--> advice)
-- on ne peut pas win “powerful”, mais, “win power” (powerful est l'adjectif puissant)
Je termine avec la faute faite 2 fois à propos des stylos.
Quand un stylo ne marche pas, on dit qu'il -->doesn't “work”.
Autrement dit, on utilise le verbe to work, pour dire que quelque chose marche / fonctionne bien.
Attention:
---> Ne pas confondre “him” et “it”
I told HIM not to do IT -ou- I told HER not to do IT = je lui ai dit de ne pas faire cela / de ne pas le faire
---> Révise tes adjectifs possessifs spécialement sa, son, ses.
---> Révise: can (to be able to) – must (to have to)
---> Tu mets des majuscules à tort et à travers, Mettre une majuscule, seulement:
en première lettre de nom propre,
en première lettre du mot qui débute une phrase,
et pour “I” ( je)
Good luck with your exams!
Réponse: petit texte capital de prunette, postée le 15-05-2007 à 20:58:08 (S | E)
Je vous remercie beaucoup
je vais réviser et corriger ce que vous m'avez indiqué 
