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Message de chloflo2 posté le 10-11-2007 à 00:32:53 (S | E | F | I)
Bonjour à tous, je dois me présenter en anglais mais j'ai peur qu'il y ait pas mal de fautes ! Quelqun pourrait-il m'aider à corriger les fautes ?
Merci bcp d'avance ! Bisous
Voilà la partie de ma présentation qui me pose problème :
7)I’m 18 years old
8)I was born on November 20th, 1988, at St-Julien
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9) I have a twin sister who is studying actually medical and social sciences for have her baccalaureate. She doesn’t look like me because we aren’t true twins : her hairs are fair and mine are brown. My mother is 55 years old. Normally, she is social worker but since quite some time, she doesn’t work because she has an illness. My father is 60 years old and he is departmental head at the town council of Bellegarde sur Valserine.
10) We haven’t pets. Before, we had a hamster but he gnawed the pipe of the dishwasher and he died because of owing to pressure of the water !
11) I have two main hobbies which I consecrate almost all my spare time : the song and the horse-riding. I sing since I’m 13 years old and I ride since I’m 14 years old. I adore that ! I am too in an association of paint-ball created by the young of the village.
12) I live in a village :Loisin. There are about 935 inhabitants. Loisin is situated in Rhônes-Alpes region, in the department of Ain, near Annecy. We can say that it’s a very quiet village ! There aren’t nightclubs, cinemas or shops ! There are just a little restaurant, a school and a field paint-ball. In fact, there are predominantly cows, cows and…cows ! So the main activity in the village is paint-ball.
13) I have begun English at secondary school and I enjoy learning English because firstly, English is a language very used in the word : English is omnipresent in France.
Message de chloflo2 posté le 10-11-2007 à 00:32:53 (S | E | F | I)
Bonjour à tous, je dois me présenter en anglais mais j'ai peur qu'il y ait pas mal de fautes ! Quelqun pourrait-il m'aider à corriger les fautes ?
Merci bcp d'avance ! Bisous
Voilà la partie de ma présentation qui me pose problème :
7)I’m 18 years old
8)I was born on November 20th, 1988, at St-Julien
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9) I have a twin sister who is studying actually medical and social sciences for have her baccalaureate. She doesn’t look like me because we aren’t true twins : her hairs are fair and mine are brown. My mother is 55 years old. Normally, she is social worker but since quite some time, she doesn’t work because she has an illness. My father is 60 years old and he is departmental head at the town council of Bellegarde sur Valserine.
10) We haven’t pets. Before, we had a hamster but he gnawed the pipe of the dishwasher and he died because of owing to pressure of the water !
11) I have two main hobbies which I consecrate almost all my spare time : the song and the horse-riding. I sing since I’m 13 years old and I ride since I’m 14 years old. I adore that ! I am too in an association of paint-ball created by the young of the village.
12) I live in a village :Loisin. There are about 935 inhabitants. Loisin is situated in Rhônes-Alpes region, in the department of Ain, near Annecy. We can say that it’s a very quiet village ! There aren’t nightclubs, cinemas or shops ! There are just a little restaurant, a school and a field paint-ball. In fact, there are predominantly cows, cows and…cows ! So the main activity in the village is paint-ball.
13) I have begun English at secondary school and I enjoy learning English because firstly, English is a language very used in the word : English is omnipresent in France.
Réponse: Texte à corriger de chloflo2, postée le 10-11-2007 à 14:15:38 (S | E)
Bonjour, j'ai déjà posté un message hier soir pour demander si quelqun pouvait m'aider à corriger mes fautes (je dois me présenter en anglais). Quelqun à d'ailleurs au la gentillesse de me répondre
Voilà la suite : Si quelqun est inspiré...
merci bcp d'avance !
Biz
English is omnipresent, in the media : on the radio, many songs lyrics are in English and it’s all the same better to understand them that to listen stupidly only the music ! What is more, a lots of jobs require to be able to speak English and it is more easy to be taked on (=embauché ?) when we have at least some bases in English.
Misfortune, I haven’t never visited an English-speaking country, but I count on doing it a day.
Réponse: Texte à corriger de gee, postée le 11-11-2007 à 10:20:22 (S | E)
Hope you'll get a more qualified amendment. In the mean time you could have a glance at my version.
7&8) I was born in St-Julien, France, in 1988. So, you guess I am 18!
9) I have a twin sister presently studying to get her degree in medical and social sciences. She doesn’t look like me because we aren’t identical twins, she is fair-haired whereas I am brown. My mother, 55, was used to working as a social-worker but is now off on extended sick-leave. My father, 60, has a position of a department head in the town council of Bellegarde-sur-Valserine.
10) We aren’t having pets anymore since our hamster died after gnawing the pipe of the dishwasher and getting overcome with water pressure.
11) The two hobbies which I dedicate almost all of my spare time to, are singing and horse-riding. I’ve been singing since I was 13 and riding since I was 14 years old. I love that! I also take part in a paintball club set up by the village’s youth.
12) I live in Loisin, a tiny village of 935 souls or so, located in Rhônes-Alpes area, Ain Department, near Annecy. It’s a very quiet village, I can say. There aren’t any nightclubs, cinemas or shops. Just a small restaurant, a school and a paintball field. In fact, there are predominantly cows, cows and… cows ! And the favourite hobby in the village is paintballing.
13) I started learning English at secondary school. I enjoy it especially because it spreads all the world around, notably in my own country, France.
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-Is it a baccalaureate or a degree?
-identical twins (from the same parents), otherwise fraternal twins
-hair is uncountable.
Réponse: Texte à corriger de chloflo2, postée le 11-11-2007 à 14:39:09 (S | E)
Merci mille fois !! Votre aide m'est très précieuse.
Réponse: Texte à corriger de chloflo2, postée le 11-11-2007 à 14:40:22 (S | E)
Merci mille fois !! Votre aide m'est très précieuse.
Kloée
