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Message de cames6 posté le 14-11-2007 à 20:38:44 (S | E | F | I)
bonjour je m'appelle sarra. J'aimerais que vous jetiez un petit coup d'oeil sur mon texte.Je souhaiterais savoir s'il y'a des fautes d'orthographe ou encore de grammaire... merci d'avance !
I went to pandora house to organize with him the sock protest. We prepared a poster with a lot of red socks. In the middle, we have written “ england world cup team in 1966 did not wear black socks”. The evening we have called all the pupils to inform them that we organising a sock protest for monday. Most of them are very interested! We find this rule stupid and unfair. Nowadays we can wear whatever colour socks we liked. We hoped that the scholl staff will ve understanding.
We gather early at six o’clock. I was in a good mood and i was impatient. At seven o’clock we were in front of the school. We were very motivated for defend our rights : we want to wear whatever colour we liked. When the director came we began the protest. He looks like astonish.
Message de cames6 posté le 14-11-2007 à 20:38:44 (S | E | F | I)
bonjour je m'appelle sarra. J'aimerais que vous jetiez un petit coup d'oeil sur mon texte.Je souhaiterais savoir s'il y'a des fautes d'orthographe ou encore de grammaire... merci d'avance !
I went to pandora house to organize with him the sock protest. We prepared a poster with a lot of red socks. In the middle, we have written “ england world cup team in 1966 did not wear black socks”. The evening we have called all the pupils to inform them that we organising a sock protest for monday. Most of them are very interested! We find this rule stupid and unfair. Nowadays we can wear whatever colour socks we liked. We hoped that the scholl staff will ve understanding.
We gather early at six o’clock. I was in a good mood and i was impatient. At seven o’clock we were in front of the school. We were very motivated for defend our rights : we want to wear whatever colour we liked. When the director came we began the protest. He looks like astonish.
Réponse: petite aide de cames6, postée le 15-11-2007 à 18:52:42 (S | E)
est-ce que quelqu'un pourrait y jeter un coup d'oeil svp ?
Réponse: petite aide de violet91, postée le 15-11-2007 à 21:49:41 (S | E)
Attention au respect des temps et la place des mots.Pandora's (féminin,normalement)----her---had written--England--In the---we called (or)ran all...up-----we were organising a demonstration---this coming Monday---were---we like---we hope--the school's Head and staff---will be---we gathered--I was getting more and more excited---to defend (but:infinitif complet)--came up (surgit),out (sortit),along (sans se presser)---he looked astonished (he couldn't believe his eyes).
Voilà ce que je peux faire pour toi. Good night.
