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Message de arpagiont posté le 29-01-2008 à 16:06:43 (S | E | F)
Bonjour,
J'ai fait un texte sur Moscou. Si quelqu'un pouvait avoir l'amabilité de le regarder et me dire ce qui ne va pas .
Merci.
Moscou is a beautiful city where you can look for everything and find one thousand times better , you can listen to the famous Russian operas .You can ask for a typical vodka in the charming inns after you looked at the Russian monuments or visited the biggest museums of art .
Museums and Moscow galleries are recognized all over the world as well as their collections, it are a part of the biggest and most important museums of the world. The artistic exhibitions , that it is about the classic or modern art, are there very frequent. They group together all the artistic branches: the painting, the photography, the sculpture.
Moscow is a dynamic city where the culture has a privileged place .The city so offers numerous entertainments, ballets and plays as well as several museums all over the world known as the Tretiakov gallery ( Russian art), the Pouchkin museum (fine art), Bolchoï or still palace of Armors .
In summer the temperature often borders 25°C and it goes down in the neighborhood of-10°C in winter
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Modifié par bridg le 29-01-2008 16:51
Il est demandé aux membres qui auront la gentillesse de répondre de signaler les fautes, d'aider le demandeur à se corriger mais de ne jamais faire le travail à sa place. Cette règle est incontournable sur ce site d'apprentissage. Merci de votre participation.
Message de arpagiont posté le 29-01-2008 à 16:06:43 (S | E | F)
Bonjour,
J'ai fait un texte sur Moscou. Si quelqu'un pouvait avoir l'amabilité de le regarder et me dire ce qui ne va pas .
Merci.
Moscou is a beautiful city where you can look for everything and find one thousand times better , you can listen to the famous Russian operas .You can ask for a typical vodka in the charming inns after you looked at the Russian monuments or visited the biggest museums of art .
Museums and Moscow galleries are recognized all over the world as well as their collections, it are a part of the biggest and most important museums of the world. The artistic exhibitions , that it is about the classic or modern art, are there very frequent. They group together all the artistic branches: the painting, the photography, the sculpture.
Moscow is a dynamic city where the culture has a privileged place .The city so offers numerous entertainments, ballets and plays as well as several museums all over the world known as the Tretiakov gallery ( Russian art), the Pouchkin museum (fine art), Bolchoï or still palace of Armors .
In summer the temperature often borders 25°C and it goes down in the neighborhood of-10°C in winter
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Modifié par bridg le 29-01-2008 16:51
Il est demandé aux membres qui auront la gentillesse de répondre de signaler les fautes, d'aider le demandeur à se corriger mais de ne jamais faire le travail à sa place. Cette règle est incontournable sur ce site d'apprentissage. Merci de votre participation.
Réponse: correction texte Moscou de arpagiont, postée le 29-01-2008 à 19:24:12 (S | E)
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