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protest song /correction
Message de geek posté le 12-02-2008 à 22:11:45 (S | E | F)
Bonjour,
Pouvez vous me corriger mes fautes s'il vous plaît?
Merci d'avance!
A++
Since ever music is very important indeed many people listen to music. Besides, people listen to music in order to find something newer than what they listened up to now. Moreover, some singers want to share their opinions, their distress and so on… that why some of these singers use protest song in order to criticize the society indeed most of them want to change things by conveying their messages. Do I think that protest songs are better with a political message? Firstly, we will see that we can put a political message to make the song better. Secondly, we will see that political is not the sole subject that make a song powerful.
On the one hand, I think that protest song is better with political message indeed it could evoke problems with the politic and make others to think about those problems.
On the other hand, protest songs could evoke other subjects such as feminist movement, the environmental movement and so on.
To conclude, I say that art is better with political message. However, politic is not the only subject that could make the protest song to be very powerful!
Message de geek posté le 12-02-2008 à 22:11:45 (S | E | F)
Bonjour,
Pouvez vous me corriger mes fautes s'il vous plaît?
Merci d'avance!
A++
Since ever music is very important indeed many people listen to music. Besides, people listen to music in order to find something newer than what they listened up to now. Moreover, some singers want to share their opinions, their distress and so on… that why some of these singers use protest song in order to criticize the society indeed most of them want to change things by conveying their messages. Do I think that protest songs are better with a political message? Firstly, we will see that we can put a political message to make the song better. Secondly, we will see that political is not the sole subject that make a song powerful.
On the one hand, I think that protest song is better with political message indeed it could evoke problems with the politic and make others to think about those problems.
On the other hand, protest songs could evoke other subjects such as feminist movement, the environmental movement and so on.
To conclude, I say that art is better with political message. However, politic is not the only subject that could make the protest song to be very powerful!
Réponse: protest song /correction de geek, postée le 14-02-2008 à 23:34:44 (S | E)
j'ai modifié mon texte.
