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Message de betty1958 posté le 10-06-2008 à 12:43:57 (S | E | F)
bonjour j'ai fait un Writing et j'aimerais si c'est possible que vous me lecorrigerai corrigiez ou me donniez votre avis.
Imagine you are on a holiday trip in a city where you're spending your dream holiday . write to a friend to tell her about it. include details about:the country you are in. the weather, your company,where you're staying ,the people in that country,your coming plans, and your feelings and impressions;
Dear Amina:
How are you and who is your family?
for my next holiday trip i want to spend it in Paris .this is my only dream in my life .I'm planing to travelling by plane with my family on June.
i guest the weather will be wonderful in this period ;sunny and agreeable
and i planning to staying in a modern hotel near the shopping centre because i want to buying some things for presents for my family.and i am also hopping to meet a new people and eating in a Nice's french restaurants ;i like them food .
see you soon .
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Modifié par bridg le 10-06-2008 12:50
Message de betty1958 posté le 10-06-2008 à 12:43:57 (S | E | F)
bonjour j'ai fait un Writing et j'aimerais si c'est possible que vous me le
Imagine you are on a holiday trip in a city where you're spending your dream holiday . write to a friend to tell her about it. include details about:the country you are in. the weather, your company,where you're staying ,the people in that country,your coming plans, and your feelings and impressions;
Dear Amina:
How are you and who is your family?
for my next holiday trip i want to spend it in Paris .this is my only dream in my life .I'm planing to travelling by plane with my family on June.
i guest the weather will be wonderful in this period ;sunny and agreeable
and i planning to staying in a modern hotel near the shopping centre because i want to buying some things for presents for my family.and i am also hopping to meet a new people and eating in a Nice's french restaurants ;i like them food .
see you soon .
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Modifié par bridg le 10-06-2008 12:50
Réponse: writing (correction) de swan85, postée le 10-06-2008 à 13:10:29 (S | E)
Bonjour Betty
Je pense que vous n'avez pas bien compris le sujet.
Actuellement vous écrivez à une amie pour lui faire part de votre projet d'aller en vacances à Paris.
Le sujet qui est demandé est que vous devez imaginer que vous êtes en voyage dans une ville qui faisait partie de vos rêves.
Vous devez donner des détails au sujet du pays, du temps, à quel endroit vous logez, vous devez parler des gens que vous rencontrez de vos projets et donner vos impressions.
Bon courage
