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Message de bidibulle posté le 14-06-2008 à 01:38:15 (S | E | F)
Bonjour
Pourriez)vous m'aider à corriger ceci svp?
As I told you, we will organize an activity in Skopje next month: an exhibition of paintings organized in cooperation with French and American painters.
From the 1 to the 20 july (date of the exhibition), an other activity will take place. It brings together artists and young people who will paint a large painting on a wall. I will need your support in finding the wall because I can't do it from here. Would you choose the "best place" for the activity? I suppose it will be necessary to obtain the authorization from the local authorities for the painting on the wall, would you also do that?
Message de bidibulle posté le 14-06-2008 à 01:38:15 (S | E | F)
Bonjour
Pourriez)vous m'aider à corriger ceci svp?
As I told you, we will organize an activity in Skopje next month: an exhibition of paintings organized in cooperation with French and American painters.
From the 1 to the 20 july (date of the exhibition), an other activity will take place. It brings together artists and young people who will paint a large painting on a wall. I will need your support in finding the wall because I can't do it from here. Would you choose the "best place" for the activity? I suppose it will be necessary to obtain the authorization from the local authorities for the painting on the wall, would you also do that?
Réponse: correction de cours de joey93, postée le 14-06-2008 à 14:31:07 (S | E)
from the first to the 20th of July
another (en toute lettre)
Réponse: correction de cours de bidibulle, postée le 15-06-2008 à 14:05:44 (S | E)
merci! Le reste est correct?
Réponse: correction de cours de joey93, postée le 15-06-2008 à 14:46:56 (S | E)
je ne suis pas experte, mais j'ai beau relire l'ensemble, ça me paraît correct
Réponse: correction de cours de bidibulle, postée le 15-06-2008 à 16:32:15 (S | E)
