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Message de natandco posté le 08-10-2008 à 15:44:02 (S | E | F)
Bonjours merci de corriger mes fautes, voila le sujet:
-Commenter, analyser une photo d'un film en 150 mots.
This document is a photograph that shows us a scene, the one in a young woman who is trainning to boxe in a gym. She is wearring gloves and she is concentrating.
This woman seems determined because she is focused on the punchball and we can read on her face that she is confident. This scene is unexpected, since usually, they are mens who do this kind of sport, a brutal sport. Maybe she acts like this to assert herself in a men's activity, so, to show that there aren't any difference between men and women. Moreover, she can react like this to prove that she can succeed and fulfil an original dream or, perhaps, to be regarded as a woman different from others.
In reality, so, in the movie, this character wants to be trainning by the best coach, but, he refused to help her,so, she will prove that she is capable of boxing like men and, try, in the same way, to win 1 million dollars.
Merci de votre aide!
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Modifié par bridg le 08-10-2008 15:45
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Réponse: Picture (correction) de gingernut, postée le 09-10-2008 à 14:32:40 (S | E)
This document is a photograph that shows us a scene of a young woman who is boxing in a gym. She is wearing gloves and she is concentrating.
This woman seems determined because she is focused on the punchball and we can see on her face that she is confident. This scene is unusual, as normally it is men who do this kind of sport; a brutal sport. Maybe she is doing this to assert herself in a man's activity, to show that there isn’t any difference between men and women. Perhaps she is doing this to prove that she can succeed or to fulfil a dream or, possibly, just to be regarded as a woman who is different from others.
In reality, as in the movie, this character wants to be trained by the best coach. But, he refused to help her, so she will prove that she is capable of boxing like a man and try, in the same way, to win 1 million dollars.
