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Message de vali93 posté le 19-10-2008 à 17:03:42 (S | E | F)

Bonjour.
This is a combat sport. It plays between two players, this is a individual sport and a olyimpic game. There are numerous different styles of this sport practiced across the world and so differents rules. There are one french, one english, one tai and others;
The rules are hit to your adversor eitheir with your fists or your feet or with your fists or feet;
THere are 3 or 4 round and the players fight with the players of similar weight
The qualites requied are the streight, the endurance,the resistance, the speed and the serious
I talked about this sport because is various sport and it a good sport to learn to control.
Merci de corriger ce texte.

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Modifié par bridg le 19-10-2008 19:17
Titre aux normes

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Modifié par lucile83 le 20-10-2008 06:11
Politesse ajoutée.


Réponse: Boxe (correction) de laure95, postée le 19-10-2008 à 19:14:20 (S | E)
Bonjour, voici ce que tu dois corriger:
-It plays between two players: two boxers fight with each other.
- this is a individual sport: A devant un mot commençant par une consonne.
-and a olyimpic game: même remarque.
- differents rules.
- The rules are hit to your adversor: it consits in hitting your adversary.
- eitheir: problème d'orthographe.
- 3 or 4 round: round doit être mis au pluriel.
- the streight: the strength.
- the serious
- is various sport?
- and it a good sport: il manque le verbe.
- to control: to control yourself.
Bon courage!




Réponse: Boxe (correction) de azer3, postée le 19-10-2008 à 19:48:20 (S | E)

This is a sportive combat. It plays between two players; this is a an individual sport and an olyimpic game. There are different numerous styles of this sport practiced across the world and also so differents rules. there are one French, one English, one Tai and others.
The rules are to hit your adversor eigheir with your fists or whit your feet.
There are 3 or 4 rounds and the players fight with the players of similar weight. The qualites requied are the streight, The endurance, the resistance, the speed and the seriousity.
I talked about this sport because it is a various sport and it is a good sport to learn the self control.


Réponse: Boxe (correction) de intrepid34, postée le 19-10-2008 à 22:18:04 (S | E)
Good evening Vali93!

You will probably be in bed by now - if not, then you should be ..........But!!

This is a combat sport. The next sentence should be passive. It is played by two players. It is also an individual sport and an Olympic game. Next line ................. different styles of this sport are used all over the world. (practise est entrainer) Les anglais ne pracise pas un sport, they do it.
Adversor = opponent
3 or 4 rounds = pluriel
pas d'article defini = strength, resistance etc.
Et dernièrement:
I have spoken about this sport because it is different and a good sport to learn self-control

Good luck
Intrepid


Réponse: Boxe (correction) de cecilward, postée le 20-10-2008 à 18:31:04 (S | E)
azer3, if you re-post your new corrected version that would be good, because I might need to look again particularly at the last part which I found hard to understand.

About the "sport plays between two players", as was pointed out earlier this needs to be "it is played".

There is a problem with the word "between" here: consider "a sport for two" or "a sport played by" or "a combat sport between two"

Although the word "between" is good because it expresses the idea of conflict, using "between" in "combat sport played between two" is odd (makes the reader think of some action taking place in a region between two things). (Despite "a war/disagreement/conflict between two groups" which are all very natural.)


Réponse: Boxe (correction) de cecilward, postée le 20-10-2008 à 18:46:09 (S | E)
Coming back to "this sport plays". The behaviour of English verbs in this respect is an extremely difficult subject. You will see examples where verbs are NOT used in passive/impersonal (eg "this sport is played") constructions but you might expect a passive/impersonal based on the meaning.

These examples involve properties/abilities/tendencies of things:

"This butter is hard, it's been in the fridge, but it spreads easily after you warm it."

(meaning "you can spread it easily"). Saying "it is spread easily" feels very awkward, and "it can be spread" seems slightly un-natural.

"This magnet sticks to the fridge, but doesn't stick to the wall."

(And "one can stick the magnet"/"the magnet can be stuck" are all grammatical too.)

That fabric is very delicate - it tears easily.
Be careful with that table, the surface scratches easily.





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