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Essay about father and son
Message de so-fine posté le 14-04-2009 à 19:58:09 (S | E | F)
Bonjour à tous ! j'aimerais quelques conseils et certainement une correction sur un dialogue que j'ai rédigé, à propos d'un fils qui parle à un ami sur des propos d'éducation.
petite intro :
After phoning to his best friend, J. send him a message to give him a meeting at the rivercourt, later in the afternoon. Jamie has left because of a quarrel with his father about their different views about his future.
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avec quelque construction de phrases dont je ne suis pas sur :
J. - He wanted speak what he expects me to do in the future.
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his friend - How about just listenning his advices ?!
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J.- I reproach him for wanting me to have a family and settle down too !
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his friend- he wanted you to understand that life isn't easy and I disagree you have to believe in your dreams but be realist.
- trust me I prefer a daddy like yours in case of a daddy who forget you...
conclusion :
COnversations between children and parents are sometimes complicated because they've different views about the future. Parents want that their children make best choices and children would like Taking advantage of the life (profiter de la vie ?). Education is a hard topic often approached on discussions between parents and children.
Voilàjspr j'espère avoir quelques conseils ! merci d'avance
à bientôt ! see you !
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Modifié par lucile83 le 16-04-2009 17:40
Message de so-fine posté le 14-04-2009 à 19:58:09 (S | E | F)
Bonjour à tous ! j'aimerais quelques conseils et certainement une correction sur un dialogue que j'ai rédigé, à propos d'un fils qui parle à un ami sur des propos d'éducation.
petite intro :
After phoning to his best friend, J. send him a message to give him a meeting at the rivercourt, later in the afternoon. Jamie has left because of a quarrel with his father about their different views about his future.
[...]
avec quelque construction de phrases dont je ne suis pas sur :
J. - He wanted speak what he expects me to do in the future.
[...]
his friend - How about just listenning his advices ?!
[...]
J.- I reproach him for wanting me to have a family and settle down too !
[...]
his friend- he wanted you to understand that life isn't easy and I disagree you have to believe in your dreams but be realist.
- trust me I prefer a daddy like yours in case of a daddy who forget you...
conclusion :
COnversations between children and parents are sometimes complicated because they've different views about the future. Parents want that their children make best choices and children would like Taking advantage of the life (profiter de la vie ?). Education is a hard topic often approached on discussions between parents and children.
Voilà
à bientôt ! see you !
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Modifié par lucile83 le 16-04-2009 17:40
Réponse: Essay about father and son de dolfin56, postée le 15-04-2009 à 11:54:09 (S | E)
Hello,
I try to help you.
. - He wanted speak what he expects me to do in the future.
[...]
his friend - How about just listenning his advice?!
[...]
J.- I reproach him for wanting me to have a family and settle down too !
[...]
his friend- he wanted you to understand that life isn't easy and I disagree you have to believe in your dreams but be realist.
- trust me I prefer a daddy like yours in case of a daddy who forget you...
He wanted to tell me what he expected about my future.
How about just listenning to advice ?!
I reproach him for only wanting me to have a familly and settling down.
He wanted you to understand that life isn't always easy ,to believe in your dreams, but dont forget to stay realist.
trust me, I prefer to have a daddy like yours that one who forgets you.
to be checked by other members...
thank to ariette.Réponse: Essay about father and son de ariette, postée le 15-04-2009 à 13:26:13 (S | E)
Bonjour,
alors les verbes de volonté sont suivis de TO
donc
he wanted TO speak about what he expected (concordance des temps)me to do...
just listening TO advice (singulier)
You'd rather believe (pour donner un conseil) ou you should believe...
... instead of a Dad who doesn't care...
... want their children to make ... would like to ...(make the most of ?)
education is a vexed question often debated between...
hope it helps somewhat
Réponse: Essay about father and son de so-fine, postée le 16-04-2009 à 17:23:41 (S | E)
vous
vos traductions sont plaisantes !
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Modifié par lucile83 le 16-04-2009 17:42
