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Message de zubok posté le 15-04-2009 à 21:14:49 (S | E | F)
Bonjour à tous,
Je sollicite encore une fois votre aide pour corriger 2 des mes textes pour mon examen. Il y a un résumé et un commentaire à propos des voitures écologiques( Sur base d'un article du "Times" exposant les avantages de la nouvelle Lotus ).
Merci d'avance :d
Summary:
Lotus has recently created a new car made from weeds. Indeed, nowadays it is very important to think about green energy.
This Lotus is made from non-traditional materials such wool and hemp. A big part of useful energy is provided by solar panels situated on the roof of the car. And the paint used is cheaper and more environment friendly than the ordinary one.
Moreover, a lot of materials come from local suppliers. So, there are no costs for the transport of the materials. And the amount of CO2 produced during the transport is reduced.
Lotus has already made another environment friendly car before: an electric sport car, the Tesla Roadster. Even if it is a “green” car, it has a top speed of 200 km/h and it is very popular in America.
These cars prove us that progresses can easily be done to reduce CO2 emissions. Lotus also wants to reduce its energy consumption by searching alternative fuels, and by using wind turbines to produce electricity to power all their industry.
Comment:
I think that we all should start to drive “green” cars in the future. This Lotus is a good example of car which combines power with environment–friendly materials.
There are a lot of economic cars nowadays, like the well-known Toyota Prius and Honda Insight. And from a green point of view, a green car is a great deal because it saves you considerable money
The only disadvantage of this kind of cars is that the cost is higher compared to conventional sports cars. But, the hybrid car can counter this disadvantage by allowing consumers to save money on a long term basis.
Moreover, this car has high performances like other sports cars but with less emissions of CO2 than other sports cars.
But there are still a lot of things to do to be more environment-friendly.
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Modifié par lucile83 le 15-04-2009 21:20
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Message de zubok posté le 15-04-2009 à 21:14:49 (S | E | F)
Bonjour à tous,
Je sollicite encore une fois votre aide pour corriger 2 des mes textes pour mon examen. Il y a un résumé et un commentaire à propos des voitures écologiques( Sur base d'un article du "Times" exposant les avantages de la nouvelle Lotus ).
Merci d'avance :d
Summary:
Lotus has recently created a new car made from weeds. Indeed, nowadays it is very important to think about green energy.
This Lotus is made from non-traditional materials such wool and hemp. A big part of useful energy is provided by solar panels situated on the roof of the car. And the paint used is cheaper and more environment friendly than the ordinary one.
Moreover, a lot of materials come from local suppliers. So, there are no costs for the transport of the materials. And the amount of CO2 produced during the transport is reduced.
Lotus has already made another environment friendly car before: an electric sport car, the Tesla Roadster. Even if it is a “green” car, it has a top speed of 200 km/h and it is very popular in America.
These cars prove us that progresses can easily be done to reduce CO2 emissions. Lotus also wants to reduce its energy consumption by searching alternative fuels, and by using wind turbines to produce electricity to power all their industry.
Comment:
I think that we all should start to drive “green” cars in the future. This Lotus is a good example of car which combines power with environment–friendly materials.
There are a lot of economic cars nowadays, like the well-known Toyota Prius and Honda Insight. And from a green point of view, a green car is a great deal because it saves you considerable money
The only disadvantage of this kind of cars is that the cost is higher compared to conventional sports cars. But, the hybrid car can counter this disadvantage by allowing consumers to save money on a long term basis.
Moreover, this car has high performances like other sports cars but with less emissions of CO2 than other sports cars.
But there are still a lot of things to do to be more environment-friendly.
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Modifié par lucile83 le 15-04-2009 21:20
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Réponse: Correction/green energy. de robertbrou, postée le 17-04-2009 à 14:17:44 (S | E)
Bonjour,
Well done! A couple of minor details need attention.
Summary:
Lotus has recently created a new car made from weeds. Indeed, nowadays it is very important to think about green energy.
This Lotus is made from non-traditional materials such wool and hemp. A big part of useful energy is provided by solar panels situated on the roof of the car. And the paint used is cheaper and more environmentally friendly than
Moreover, a lot of materials come from local suppliers. So, there are no costs for the transport of the materials. And the amount of CO2 produced during the transport is reduced.
Lotus has already made another environmentally friendly car before: an electric sports car, the Tesla Roadster. Even if it is a “green” car, it has a top speed of 200 km/h and it is very popular in America.
These cars prove us that progresses can easily be done to reduce CO2 emissions. Lotus also wants to reduce its energy consumption by searching for or researching alternative fuels, and by using wind turbines to produce electricity to power all their industry.
Comment:
I think that we all should start
There are a lot of economic cars nowadays, like the well-known Toyota Prius and Honda Insight. And from a green point of view, a green car is a great deal because it saves you considerable money
The only disadvantage of this kind of car
Moreover, this car has high performance
But there are still a lot of things to do to be more environmentally friendly.
Hope this helps!
robertbrou
Réponse: Correction/green energy. de zubok, postée le 17-04-2009 à 23:06:35 (S | E)
Ahhh quelqu'un qui a répondu :D
Merci de ton aide ^^
