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Message de binbon posté le 03-05-2009 à 13:07:52 (S | E | F)
Bonjour à tous,
J'aimerais savoir si cette lettre est bien rédigée :
Dear Janet,
I hope you're doing well!
I'm having a lot of fun here, in England. I took the ferry boat, I saw a wonderful landscape!
My classmates and I are going to the Royal Pavilion in Brighton and we'll see the H.M.S Victory, the warship of Admiral Nelson in Portmouth. We'll also visit Rye, a little town on the coast.
I'm staying at Mrs Johnson's house.
Take care of you!
Love,
Clara.
Merci beaucoup pour votre aide! Elle me sera très utile!
Message de binbon posté le 03-05-2009 à 13:07:52 (S | E | F)
Bonjour à tous,
J'aimerais savoir si cette lettre est bien rédigée :
Dear Janet,
I hope you're doing well!
I'm having a lot of fun here, in England. I took the ferry boat, I saw a wonderful landscape!
My classmates and I are going to the Royal Pavilion in Brighton and we'll see the H.M.S Victory, the warship of Admiral Nelson in Portmouth. We'll also visit Rye, a little town on the coast.
I'm staying at Mrs Johnson's house.
Take care of you!
Love,
Clara.
Merci beaucoup pour votre aide! Elle me sera très utile!
Réponse: Correction d'une lettre-Anglais de laure95, postée le 03-05-2009 à 17:09:04 (S | E)
Bonjour, voici ce que tu dois corriger:
Dear Janet,
I hope you're doing well!
I'm having a lot of fun here, in England. I took the ferry boat, I saw (je mettrais plutôt le present perfect) a wonderful landscape!
My classmates and I are going to the Royal Pavilion in Brighton and we'll see the H.M.S Victory, the warship of Admiral Nelson in Portmouth. We'll (choisis entre WILL ET BE GOING TO et mets la même chose pour ces 3 verbes) also visit Rye, a little town on the coast.
I'm staying at Mrs Johnson's
Take care of you!
Love,
Clara.
Réponse: Correction d'une lettre-Anglais de binbon, postée le 03-05-2009 à 17:41:58 (S | E)
Merci beaucoup pour votre aide!
