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Message de jonew10 posté le 24-05-2009 à 11:46:42 (S | E | F)
Bonjour,
pourriez-vous m'aider à corriger ces phrases, s'il vous plaît? Merci.
can you help me to correct these sentences, please? Thank you.
1)Furthermore, people can know other culture.
2)There are some activities or something else that they don't have in their country.
3)Holidays allow not only relaxing in familiar places but also visiting things for our knowledge.
4)So it is the moment to do new things.
5)You do not know where you would go, would stay and would eat.
6)It is sometimes another money and some people do not like going to the bank to exchange.
pour les mots en bleus, il faut en fait seulement les remplacer par des autres mots.
Encore
Message de jonew10 posté le 24-05-2009 à 11:46:42 (S | E | F)
Bonjour,
pourriez-vous m'aider à corriger ces phrases, s'il vous plaît? Merci.
can you help me to correct these sentences, please? Thank you.
1)Furthermore, people can know other culture.
2)There are some activities or something else that they don't have in their country.
3)Holidays allow not only relaxing in familiar places but also visiting things for our knowledge.
4)So it is the moment to do new things.
5)You do not know where you would go, would stay and would eat.
6)It is sometimes another money and some people do not like going to the bank to exchange.
pour les mots en bleus, il faut en fait seulement les remplacer par des autres mots.
Encore
Réponse: Correction-composition de brettdallen, postée le 24-05-2009 à 14:08:11 (S | E)
Bonjour,
Quelques éléments de correction:
1)Furthermore(peut-être un peu trop soutenu, non? "Besides", "In addition"), people can(get to) know other culture(pluriel).
2)There are some activities or something else("dishes", "traditions", "festivals" ?) that they don't have in their country.
3)Holidays allow not only relaxing(pas la bonne forme. Voir le fonctionnement de "allow") in familiar places but also visiting(même remarque que pour "relaxing") things(cultural sites? places of interest? museums? châteaux/castles?...) for our knowledge.
4)So it is the moment("time") to do new things("activities"?).
5)You do not know where you would("will"?) go, would stay and would eat.(je relierais les trois verbes avec "will")
6)It is sometimes another money(vérifiez "devise") and some people do not like going to the bank to exchange("change it"). La phrase est un peu maladroite. J'aurais dit: "Dans certains pays, la devise/monnaie n'est pas la même et certains touristes n'aiment pas devoir aller au bureau de change."
Tout n'est pas corrigé, mais vous pouvez déjà apporter quelques améliorations.
Cordialement.
Réponse: Correction-composition de dolfin56, postée le 24-05-2009 à 14:22:58 (S | E)
Hello jenew,
)Furthermore, people can know other culture.
2)There are some activities or something else that they don't have in their country.
3)Holidays allow not only relaxing in familiar places but also visiting things for our knowledge.
4)So it is the moment to do new things.
5)You do not know where you would go, would stay and would eat.
6)It is sometimes another money and some people do not like going to the bank to exchange.
perhaps:
1-Furthermore, people can discover other culture.
2-)There are some activities or outside interests that they don't have in their own country.
3)Holidays allow us, not only relaxing in familiar places, but also visiting places to get knowledge.
4)So it is the right time to discover many things we didn't know.
5)You don't know where you will go, will stay and will eat.
6)you may have to use other money, and some people don't like to have to change in a bank.
have a nice day.
Réponse: Correction-composition de jonew10, postée le 27-05-2009 à 18:05:25 (S | E)
Thank you dolfin56 and brettdallen for your help.
.If other people think that there are yet mistakes, you may correct them of course.
Si d'autres personnes pensent qu'il y a encore des fautes, vous pouvez les corriger bien sûr.
Beste whises
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Modifié par jonew10 le 27-05-2009 18:05
