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Message de toxictears18 posté le 11-10-2009 à 20:42:18 (S | E | F)
Bonjour, je poste cette nouvelle rédaction pour avoir une petite idée des erreurs que j'aurai ai pu faire.
Merci d'avance.
The most beautiful day of my life was when I realized that I was pregant.
I was jumping for joy.From now on,I could cherish a little living being.
I was submerged by deep emotions that camefrom my depths.I greeted mu husband with a kiss.It was so heady.
When I used to go in town to buy baby clothes,I was humming in the departements.
I loved prancing on the paths in the park.
I felt the baby growing in my tummy.As far as I concerned It 's the bes texperience about sharing.You could see it on my faceI was bleaming for joy.It was the beginning of a new life.
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Modifié par lucile83 le 11-10-2009 21:18
Message de toxictears18 posté le 11-10-2009 à 20:42:18 (S | E | F)
Bonjour, je poste cette nouvelle rédaction pour avoir une petite idée des erreurs que j'
Merci d'avance.
The most beautiful day of my life was when I realized that I was pregant.
I was jumping for joy.From now on,I could cherish a little living being.
I was submerged by deep emotions that camefrom my depths.I greeted mu husband with a kiss.It was so heady.
When I used to go in town to buy baby clothes,I was humming in the departements.
I loved prancing on the paths in the park.
I felt the baby growing in my tummy.As far as I concerned It 's the bes texperience about sharing.You could see it on my faceI was bleaming for joy.It was the beginning of a new life.
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Modifié par lucile83 le 11-10-2009 21:18
Réponse: Expressing joy de sanna6, postée le 12-10-2009 à 21:57:37 (S | E)
Bonsoir,
j'essaye de regarder ta rédaction, il y a une phrase que je ne comprends pas
- When I used to go in town to buy baby clothes,I was humming in the departements.
Chaque fois que j'avais l'habitude d'aller en ville acheter des vêtements pour bébé,... après je ne comprends pas ce que tu as voulu dire.
peux tu m'aider s'il te plaît
Réponse: Expressing joy de toxictears18, postée le 12-10-2009 à 23:19:44 (S | E)
oui c'es( je chantonnait lol
Réponse: Expressing joy de jodimoi, postée le 14-10-2009 à 10:54:30 (S | E)
Hello,
You said "bleaming" but it's not correct the right word is beaming = épanoui
Réponse: Expressing joy de sanna6, postée le 14-10-2009 à 12:33:13 (S | E)
Bonjour,
Je te dis ce que je vois
The most beautiful day of my life was when I realized that I was pregnant.
I was jumping for joy.From now on,I could cherish a little living being.
I was submerged by deep emotions that came from (inside) my depths.I greeted my husband with a kiss.It was so heady."wonderful"
When I used to go in town to buy baby clothes,I was humming in the departements.
I loved prancing on the paths in the park.
I felt the baby growing in my tummy.As far as I concerned "remember" It 's the best experience about sharing.You could see it on my face I was bleaming "beaming" for joy.It was the beginning of a new life.
See you soon
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