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Message de matsuri posté le 27-03-2010 à 15:09:14 (S | E | F)
Bonjour,
J'ai un exposé oral en Anglais lundi mais je ne suis pas sûre de la syntaxe des phrases, et si c'est correctement dit...
Pouvez-vous me dire si vous voyez des fautes ? ^^ Par ailleurs, j'amerais aussi trouver un site où on peut entendre des mots en Anglais (pour corriger ma prononciation qui n'est pas superbe...). Merci beaucoup !
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Bullying was a big problem in schools during a long time. Today, there are many projects for stop bullying, by differents systems.
There are many forms of bullying. A recent form is the text messaging: We receive suddenly a text of bullying. It's difficult to combat, because we don't know who is the author of the message.
Mediators are pupils who meet kids who have to make bullying. They tried to find a solution to the problem. Kids like the idea because they talk with pupils and not with adults. Often, they tell their problems before they get serious.
An English School tried a system where pupils volunteer are Guardian Angels. Pupil can send a message to them if they began the bullying. Guardian Angel must show message to a teacher and he contacts the pupil.
A teacher can ask to see messages of bullying. Also, pupil can send a message to him and talk to the bully. Pupil can be in the anonymous.
There are mentors in many schools. It's the older pupils. Mentors are there for help pupils. Mentors talk about his problems that he had. After, they tried to find a solution for stop bullying for pupil.
A radio station started to talk to the anti-bullying the last year. They asked people to wear blue wristbands. It shows that victims of bullying aren't alone and that the bullying is not accepted.
There is also an other band. The color is pink. It's for people that we have a cancer. The color for the band of the anti-bullying is blue.
There was a survey of 11 to 19 years-old in the United Kingdom about the bullying. 14 percent said they had bullied by text. A new form of bullying is take photo and send this to others people.
A big solution for combat the bullying is talk to someone. There are parents, teacher, or even a phone helpline. It's important to know that we aren't alone.
***
Merci d'avance ^^
Message de matsuri posté le 27-03-2010 à 15:09:14 (S | E | F)
Bonjour,
J'ai un exposé oral en Anglais lundi mais je ne suis pas sûre de la syntaxe des phrases, et si c'est correctement dit...
Pouvez-vous me dire si vous voyez des fautes ? ^^ Par ailleurs, j'amerais aussi trouver un site où on peut entendre des mots en Anglais (pour corriger ma prononciation qui n'est pas superbe...). Merci beaucoup !
***
Bullying was a big problem in schools during a long time. Today, there are many projects for stop bullying, by differents systems.
There are many forms of bullying. A recent form is the text messaging: We receive suddenly a text of bullying. It's difficult to combat, because we don't know who is the author of the message.
Mediators are pupils who meet kids who have to make bullying. They tried to find a solution to the problem. Kids like the idea because they talk with pupils and not with adults. Often, they tell their problems before they get serious.
An English School tried a system where pupils volunteer are Guardian Angels. Pupil can send a message to them if they began the bullying. Guardian Angel must show message to a teacher and he contacts the pupil.
A teacher can ask to see messages of bullying. Also, pupil can send a message to him and talk to the bully. Pupil can be in the anonymous.
There are mentors in many schools. It's the older pupils. Mentors are there for help pupils. Mentors talk about his problems that he had. After, they tried to find a solution for stop bullying for pupil.
A radio station started to talk to the anti-bullying the last year. They asked people to wear blue wristbands. It shows that victims of bullying aren't alone and that the bullying is not accepted.
There is also an other band. The color is pink. It's for people that we have a cancer. The color for the band of the anti-bullying is blue.
There was a survey of 11 to 19 years-old in the United Kingdom about the bullying. 14 percent said they had bullied by text. A new form of bullying is take photo and send this to others people.
A big solution for combat the bullying is talk to someone. There are parents, teacher, or even a phone helpline. It's important to know that we aren't alone.
***
Merci d'avance ^^
Réponse: Exposé oral - Correction possible ? de laure95, postée le 28-03-2010 à 16:24:35 (S | E)
Bonjour,
Voici ce que tu dois corriger:
Bullying was a big problem in schools during a long time. Today, there are many projects for stop bullying, by differents (adjectifs invariables + mettre 1 verbe avant) systems.
There are many forms of bullying. A recent form is the text messaging: We receive suddenly (à déplacer) a text of bullying. It's difficult to combat (against + pronom complément), because we don't know who is the author (interrogative indirecte: sujet + verbe) of the message.
Mediators are pupils who meet kids who have to make bullying. They tried (temps) to find a solution to the problem. Kids like the idea because they talk with pupils and not with adults. Often (à déplacer), they tell about their problems before they get serious.
An English School tried a system where pupils volunteer are Guardian Angels. Pupil can send a message to them if they began
A teacher can ask to see messages of bullying. Also, (article) pupil can send a message to him and talk to the bully. (article) Pupil can be
There are mentors in many schools. It's the older (superlatif) pupils. Mentors are there for help pupils. Mentors talk about his problems
A radio station started to talk to the anti-bullying
There is also an other band. The color is pink. It's for people that
There was a survey of 11 to 19 years-old in the United Kingdom about
A big solution for combat the bullying is talk to someone. There are parents, teacher, or even a phone helpline. It's important to know that we aren't alone.
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