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Message de lorena12 posté le 30-03-2011 à 18:48:52 (S | E | F)
Bonjour,
Pouvez-vous vérifier ce texte afin de me rendre compte de mes erreurs s'il vous plaît ?
merci pour vos réponses
When I was in primary school, my life was very different than today. I didn't ask many questions, I lived my life without worrying about others. The atmosphere in the classroom was different, everyone having fun together and everyone was equal. Today different people are often rejected.
I don't think I really changed except I had a different look and a different vision of life.
When I was eight I saw everything in pink. Everything was fine and I didn't see the negative side of things.
I have never been punished at school, I listened quietly lesson. I always did what the teachers wanted and I respected them. At the age of eight, I played without worrying about the look of others.
I have a happy memories of my schooldays in primary school, It was a great time of my life even if I don't want to go back.
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Modifié par lucile83 le 30-03-2011 19:44
Message de lorena12 posté le 30-03-2011 à 18:48:52 (S | E | F)
Bonjour,
Pouvez-vous vérifier ce texte afin de me rendre compte de mes erreurs s'il vous plaît ?
merci pour vos réponses
When I was in primary school, my life was very different than today. I didn't ask many questions, I lived my life without worrying about others. The atmosphere in the classroom was different, everyone having fun together and everyone was equal. Today different people are often rejected.
I don't think I really changed except I had a different look and a different vision of life.
When I was eight I saw everything in pink. Everything was fine and I didn't see the negative side of things.
I have never been punished at school, I listened quietly lesson. I always did what the teachers wanted and I respected them. At the age of eight, I played without worrying about the look of others.
I have a happy memories of my schooldays in primary school, It was a great time of my life even if I don't want to go back.
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Modifié par lucile83 le 30-03-2011 19:44
Réponse: Primary school /correction de gerondif, postée le 30-03-2011 à 19:01:56 (S | E)
Bonsoir,
When I was in primary school, my life was very different than(from en anglais, et d'après le double click, than en américain mais than est souvent barré comme faux par ici) today. I didn't ask many questions, I lived my life without worrying about others. The atmosphere in the classroom was different, everyone (auxiliaire être au prétérit)having fun together and everyone was equal. Today different people are often rejected. (sera mal compris: people who are different are often rejected)
I don't think I really changed except I had a different look and a different vision of life.
When I was eight I saw everything in pink (je ne sais pas si on dit ça en anglais). Everything was fine and I didn't see the negative side of things.
I have never been punished at school, I listened quietly (construction de listen. quietly soit devant le verbe soit à la fin de la phrase) lesson. I always did what the teachers wanted and I respected them. At the age of eight, I played without worrying about the look of others.
I have a happy memories(choisissez sing ou pluriel, plutôt le pluriel)) of my schooldays in primary school, It was a great time of(in) my life even if I don't want to go back.
Réponse: Primary school /correction de lorena12, postée le 30-03-2011 à 19:05:33 (S | E)
Merci c'est très gentil de votre part.
Réponse: Primary school /correction de dsmith, postée le 01-04-2011 à 15:18:24 (S | E)
In English we say "To look at something through rose-colored glasses"
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Réponse: Primary school /correction de lorena12, postée le 01-04-2011 à 22:24:43 (S | E)
Merci
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