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Message de shooki posté le 02-11-2011 à 10:54:28 (S | E | F)
Bonjour,
alors voilà je dois faire la couverture d'un tabloïd en anglais et je pense qu'il doit y avoir quelques (ou beaucoup de ^^') fautes.
Est-ce que quelqu'un pourrait m'aider s'il vous plaît ?
We know Rihanna for her so beautiful voice and she is more and more famous thanks to her tubes that everybody loves. Man down, Don't stop the music or even California king bed: all are internationals tubes. But she is also known for her provocating and even shocking facts and dress. Now, the princess of the Barbados is also known for being a liar. All these years that we dancing on her music, go to her concert, she was laying and keeping a terrible secret. She was telling us that she wrote most of her songs but it was wrong she was just a thief. Yesterday, she was arrested during her concert in New-York because she is accused of harassment, plagiarism and involuntary omicide. In fact, since months and maybe since her first single she making tubes with 3 or 4 unknown singles. She took the music and the lyrics, and she make a tube with. Most of the time, the original authors realized it and Rihanna payed them. But some didn't agree and it was the beginning of hell for them until they kill themselves like Margaret Smith, a 21 American years old. She was found two days ago at home by her mother with a letter that clearly accused the star. An inquiry is open.
Merci d'avance
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Modifié par lucile83 le 02-11-2011 10:55
Message de shooki posté le 02-11-2011 à 10:54:28 (S | E | F)
Bonjour,
Est-ce que quelqu'un pourrait m'aider s'il vous plaît ?
We know Rihanna for her so beautiful voice and she is more and more famous thanks to her tubes that everybody loves. Man down, Don't stop the music or even California king bed: all are internationals tubes. But she is also known for her provocating and even shocking facts and dress. Now, the princess of the Barbados is also known for being a liar. All these years that we dancing on her music, go to her concert, she was laying and keeping a terrible secret. She was telling us that she wrote most of her songs but it was wrong she was just a thief. Yesterday, she was arrested during her concert in New-York because she is accused of harassment, plagiarism and involuntary omicide. In fact, since months and maybe since her first single she making tubes with 3 or 4 unknown singles. She took the music and the lyrics, and she make a tube with. Most of the time, the original authors realized it and Rihanna payed them. But some didn't agree and it was the beginning of hell for them until they kill themselves like Margaret Smith, a 21 American years old. She was found two days ago at home by her mother with a letter that clearly accused the star. An inquiry is open.
Merci d'avance
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Modifié par lucile83 le 02-11-2011 10:55
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