Correction/ Nina Dobrev
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Message de aurelia25 posté le 10-03-2013 à 10:05:39 (S | E | F)
Bonjour à tous ,
j'ai besoin de votre aide s'il vous plaît pour la correction d'une page en anglais sur une actrice.
Merci pour vos réponses.
This actress became famous with her part in The Vampires Diaries ( a teen series ) Although she is young,she has already won many awards and honors.I really love her way of being,her joy and her talent.
Quelques phrases : it was her firt step as an actress
She was a model until she decided to become an actress.
So she has taken many drama's lessons.
She has proved she is also a singer.
She has proved that she has got a lot of talent because she also acts an other character.
Where as Elena is a great people she is her opposite.
She met Ian whose she fell in love.
The money was donated to an association.
Merci de m'aider à corriger
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Modifié par lucile83 le 10-03-2013 10:47
Message de aurelia25 posté le 10-03-2013 à 10:05:39 (S | E | F)
Bonjour à tous ,
j'ai besoin de votre aide s'il vous plaît pour la correction d'une page en anglais sur une actrice.
Merci pour vos réponses.
This actress became famous with her part in The Vampires Diaries ( a teen series ) Although she is young,she has already won many awards and honors.I really love her way of being,her joy and her talent.
Quelques phrases : it was her firt step as an actress
She was a model until she decided to become an actress.
So she has taken many drama's lessons.
She has proved she is also a singer.
She has proved that she has got a lot of talent because she also acts an other character.
Where as Elena is a great people she is her opposite.
She met Ian whose she fell in love.
The money was donated to an association.
Merci de m'aider à corriger
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Modifié par lucile83 le 10-03-2013 10:47
Réponse: Correction/ Nina Dobrev de gerondif, postée le 10-03-2013 à 10:20:23 (S | E)
Hello,
This actress became famous with her part in The Vampires Diaries ( a teen series ) Although she is young,she has already won many awards and honors.I really love her way of being,her joy and her talent.
Quelques phrases : it was her firt step as an actress
She was a model until she decided to become an actress.
So she has taken many drama's lessons.
She has proved she is also a singer.
She has proved that she has got a lot of talent because she also acts as another character.(she can play two characters)
Whereas(= mais au contraire) Elena is a great people( un grand peuple???), she is her opposite.(n'a pas de sens)
She met Ian whose she fell in love.(avec lequel) you fall in love with somebody)
The money was donated to an association.
Réponse: Correction/ Nina Dobrev de aurelia25, postée le 10-03-2013 à 10:34:28 (S | E)
Merci ;)
J'en ai oublié une ;)
la voici : Katherine is the Elena double
Réponse: Correction/ Nina Dobrev de emma2001, postée le 10-03-2013 à 12:59:49 (S | E)
tu aime vampire diaries toi?ben,ta raison
si des questions sur tvd demande moi lol
ps t dans kel college
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