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Message de rihab91 posté le 15-03-2013 à 17:54:41 (S | E | F)
Bonjour
je prépare un examen à la fin de l'année et pour m'entrainer j'ai fait un mini résumé de chaque séquence que j'ai étudiée.
J'aimerais donc que vous me corrigiez s'il vous plaît en m'indiquant les erreurs et en me disant ce que je devrais faire pour avoir une meilleure expression en anglais (je devrais être bilingue à la fin de l'année "normalement!")
Merci pour vos réponses.
première notion : Les héros
deuxième notion : le développement
First off all we have studies a text about heroes. This text is hero as divinity , it's a novel. It was written by Thomas Carlyle. This text is about men who have a connection whith heaver. The light heros shine on us has it's sounce there. That's why comming a hero will always be profitable to any men.
And whith th same autor we hav learnt about Odin. In this text we speak about odin as a hero because he was the inventor of Letters .That's why he projected himself over the whole history of this people. And finally his way of thought became their way of tought.
odd man out
It's a picture where we can see a conveyo rbelt. In this conveyor there are five men four are well-built but one of the five is very skimmy. I think it's a genetic selection where the machine is sorting out, it reject all the clones which have a flaw and put them in a skip. Maybe they want, when they created this machine, to improve the humane.
And then to achieve their goal they have to choose the good DNA sample and for that they have to do a selectives breeding.
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Modifié par lucile83 le 15-03-2013 17:59
Message de rihab91 posté le 15-03-2013 à 17:54:41 (S | E | F)
Bonjour
je prépare un examen à la fin de l'année et pour m'entrainer j'ai fait un mini résumé de chaque séquence que j'ai étudiée.
J'aimerais donc que vous me corrigiez s'il vous plaît en m'indiquant les erreurs et en me disant ce que je devrais faire pour avoir une meilleure expression en anglais (je devrais être bilingue à la fin de l'année "normalement!")
Merci pour vos réponses.
première notion : Les héros
deuxième notion : le développement
First off all we have studies a text about heroes. This text is hero as divinity , it's a novel. It was written by Thomas Carlyle. This text is about men who have a connection whith heaver. The light heros shine on us has it's sounce there. That's why comming a hero will always be profitable to any men.
And whith th same autor we hav learnt about Odin. In this text we speak about odin as a hero because he was the inventor of Letters .That's why he projected himself over the whole history of this people. And finally his way of thought became their way of tought.
odd man out
It's a picture where we can see a conveyo rbelt. In this conveyor there are five men four are well-built but one of the five is very skimmy. I think it's a genetic selection where the machine is sorting out, it reject all the clones which have a flaw and put them in a skip. Maybe they want, when they created this machine, to improve the humane.
And then to achieve their goal they have to choose the good DNA sample and for that they have to do a selectives breeding.
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Modifié par lucile83 le 15-03-2013 17:59
Réponse: Devoir maison /aide de notrepere, postée le 15-03-2013 à 22:46:42 (S | E)
BonjourIl existe beaucoup de fautes d'inattention (orthographe, temps, accords, etc.)
First off all, we have studies
a text about heroes. This text is(concerne?) hero as divinity , it's a novel. It was written by Thomas Carlyle. This text is about men who have a connection whith heaver. The light heros that? shine on us has it's sounce there. That's why comming a hero will always be profitable to any men(man?).And whith
th same autor we hav learnt about Odin. In this text we speak about Odin as a hero because he was the inventor of Letters .That's why he projected himself over the whole history of this people. And finally his way of odd man out
It's a picture where we can see a conveyor belt. In
(sur?) this conveyor there are five men; four are well-built but one of the five is very skimmy. I think it's a genetic selection where the machine is sorting out, it reject(accorde) all the clones which have a flaw and put(idem) them in a skip
. Maybe they want(temps), when they created this machine, to improve the(inutile) humane.And then to achieve their goal they have to choose the good DNA sample and for that they have to do a selectives breeding.
Réponse: Devoir maison /aide de rihab91, postée le 16-03-2013 à 11:57:01 (S | E)
Bonjour
First off all, we have studies a text about heroes. This text concerne hero as divinity , it's a novel. It was written by Thomas Carlyle. This text is about men who have a connection whith heaver. The light hero that shine on us has it's sounce there. That's why being a hero will always be profitable to any men.
And with the same autor we have learnt about Odin. In this text we spoke about Odin as a hero because he was the inventor of Letters .That's why he projected himself over the whole history of this people. And finally his way of thinking became their way of thinking.
odd man out
It's a picture where we can see a conveyor belt. On this conveyor there are five men; four are well-built but one of the five is very skimmy. I think it's a genetic selection where the machine is sorting out, it rejects all the clones which have a flaw and puts them in a skip. Maybe they wanted, when they created this machine, to improve humane.
And then to achieve their goal they have to choose the good DNA sample and for that they have to do a selectives breeding.
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