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Message de kaleid posté le 21-03-2015 à 19:53:29 (S | E | F)
Bonjour!
Je souhaiterais que quelqu'un me corrige mon texte d'entraînement s'il vous plaît!
Je remercie d'avance ceux ou celles qui prendront le temps de m'aider!

In the "Big Brother regime", the people were terrorize, oppressived and intimidate, since they were spied by theThough Police. Moreover, that omnipresent spyng created a lack of privacy and freedom for the people. All the more, since there propaganda and the media was manipulated. We can even say that this people were alienated by this propaganda.

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Modifié par lucile83 le 21-03-2015 20:31


Réponse: Big Brother/Correction de here4u, postée le 22-03-2015 à 10:50:25 (S | E)
hello !

In the "Big Brother regime", the people were terrorize, oppressived and intimidate, since they were spied by theThough Police. Moreover, that omnipresent spyng created a lack of privacy and freedom for the people. All the more, since (very clumsy!)there propaganda (??this isn't a real sentence!) and the media was manipulated. We can even say that this people were alienated by this propaganda.

Good luck!




Réponse: Big Brother/Correction de kaleid, postée le 22-03-2015 à 15:10:26 (S | E)
Hello!

First of all, I thank you for your help and advice ^^!
Here is the text after correction:

In the "Big Brother regime", the people were terrorized, oppressed and intimidated, since they were spied by the though Police. Moreover, that omnipresent espionnage created a lack of privacy and freedom for the people. In addition to that, this people were being alienated by the constant propaganda.



Réponse: Big Brother/Correction de here4u, postée le 22-03-2015 à 19:06:07 (S | E)
A few remaining ones ...

In the "Big Brother regime", the people were terrorized, oppressed and intimidated, since they were spied by the though(it's the 'Thought Police' isn't it?) Police. Moreover, that omnipresent espionnage (or spying) created a lack of privacy and freedom for the people. In addition to that, this people were being alienated by the constant propaganda.





Réponse: Big Brother/Correction de kaleid, postée le 23-03-2015 à 21:37:38 (S | E)
Good evening!
Again, I thank you for your help.
In the "Big Brother regime", the people were terrorized, oppressed and intimidated, since they were spied by the Thought Police. Moreover, that omnipresent spying created a lack of privacy and freedom for the people. In addition to that, that people were being alienated by the constant propaganda.





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