I 'd like to describe my day

<< Forum anglais: Questions sur l'anglais || En bas

[POSTER UNE NOUVELLE REPONSE] [Suivre ce sujet]

I 'd like to describe my day
Message de epinay posté le 22-10-2009 à 22:48:37 (S | E | F)
Hello all

I must describe my day or my morning to my friend ,sorry for my mistakes, could

you help me please.

Today,I woke up at 6 am and I had a shower and I brushed my teeth, then I

had a breakfast, after that I left to work.

for any corrections

Epinay

-------------------
Modifié par lucile83 le 23-10-2009 07:57
titre

---

Réponse: I 'd like to describe my day de brettdallen, postée le 22-10-2009 à 22:56:38 (S | E)
Bonsoir,
Je souligne ce qui ne va pas...

I must("have to"?) describe my day or my morning to my friend ,sorry for my mistakes, could

you help me please( ? ).

Today,I woke up at 6 am and I had a shower and( , ) I brushed my teeth,(and) then I

had a breakfast, after that I left to work.

En fait, c'est simple, efficace et correct dans l'ensemble.
Amicalement.

---

Réponse: I 'd like to describe my day de epinay, postée le 22-10-2009 à 23:15:48 (S | E)
hello Brettdallen

Thank you so much, you helped me a lot,please is my question was well also? ?(est-ce que ma question était bien posée merci).
Best Wishes

Epinay

---

Réponse: I 'd like to describe my day de lullabies, postée le 23-10-2009 à 10:36:13 (S | E)
I'm not quite sure whether "Hello all!" is correct or not. Wouldn't be "Hello everybody!" a bit better?

---

Réponse: I 'd like to describe my day de epinay, postée le 23-10-2009 à 20:43:45 (S | E)
Hello Lullabies,

Thank you for the corrections .It's a pleasure to find people who want to share

their knowledge.It helps me to improve my English.

Best Wishes

Epinay

---

[POSTER UNE NOUVELLE REPONSE] [Suivre ce sujet]

<< Forum anglais: Questions sur l'anglais